this is awesome. the pose really makes the composition. i really like that you can tell a lot about the character even thought there is little information. The only thing that i dont like is that you put the Cheshire cat in the background. now dont get me wrong he is actually my favorite character but in this case the placement distracts from the model and takes away from the story that you are try to tell. if you still want to keep him you should experiment more on the placement and the opacity to turn down the attention to it. sorry if this is a lot just want to give some advice.
thnQ so much for the comment! without the cat there a lot of empty space that i didnt like,but i wasnt sure that cat in the back is good or not,hmmm i'm gonna try more to find a better place , and change the oppacity thanks for the advice